Aet Lindling

Four likes, yet no reviews! Not even a comment! Never fear, Aet is here. My goodness this is evocative. And a bit obscure in meaning. Not in a bad way, ...

Sorry I didn’t get to this in time for BHM! But then, every month is a Black history month. First thing is that you don’t need a comma between skin ...

I highly recommend “no longer wanting to stay in the bed”. It would flow so much better. Try reading it with the “the” and without the “the” and you’ll see. ...

I like your rhymes a lot, even if I was hoping for a bit more elaborate schemes when I saw your username. (I jest.) They are well placed. I wonder ...

Wow, this is beautiful. I’ve never read any Frank O’Hara, I take it that this is inspired by his poetry. Not sure if I should go and read some now ...

The general sentiment of the first two paragraphs has been around for a long time, even before the internet and social media. But it still rings true. It’s interesting to ...

Hey there! It’s St. Patrick’s Day event review time! ☘ 1st Leaf: First Impressions & Initial Thoughts This was a poem I enjoyed a lot! You portrayed autism very vividly. ...

I’m so glad that I’m a fast enough reader that I was able to read this for the first time while synchronizing my breathing to the prompts. It was a ...

I liked this a lot and it’s fun that it’s managed to become the #2 featured work on YWS right now and yet I’ll still be the first review. So ...

I have no idea which was written first, because I’m all too familiar with weird writing patterns. I wrote a chapter of my budding novel entirely backwards for the most ...

Interesting. I was scoffing at the need to include a glossary at first, but I suppose the point is that you think it’s violent at first and once deciphered realize ...

Dang, what a powerful poem. I love the ending. This really spoke to me, even though I’ve never really experienced any of the life events depicted. And isn’t that a ...

1) I have no idea, but the villagers could be desire and the plague sexual assault. The second stanza makes this seem more likely with the ‘pink petal’ that a ...

Amorist! What a fun word. And what a fun poem. I love the journey you take us on, even if it’s somewhat predictable it’s well-worn territory for a reason. There’s ...

Just a very minor nitpick here, perhaps I’ll return later to do a proper review. Sorry. Typically, style guides generally recommend no spaces around an em-dash unless they’re in a ...