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Re: The Hunt for the Delawackus
Hello hello! Sorry it took me so long to get to this! I had a lovely half-complete review going but it seems to have disappeared somehow after loading from autosave ...
Mar 29 -
Re: Z-9826
This has been in the Green Room much too long for what a great poem it is, so let’s fix that. Wow, I like the formatting here a lot . ...
Mar 25 -
Re: Suicide
Time to try reviewing something other than poetry, now that I drained the Green Room of 0 review poems. Goodness, this is quite the heavy piece. First off I’d highly ...
Mar 24 -
Re: Your blood and greed (ambition of the mind)
Ooh I like this. Love a poem that describes the universal human condition in such unflinching terms. Love a good bit of free verse that isn’t afraid to expound at ...
Mar 22 -
Re: 🪻🌨️ They all had to watch 🌨️🪻
Oh hey there! It’s the last poem/lyric from the green room that I have to get to from before today that has zero reviews! So, I put this one off ...
Mar 22 -
Re: you appear out of nothing, like you've left me for good
Four likes, yet no reviews! Not even a comment! Never fear, Aet is here. My goodness this is evocative. And a bit obscure in meaning. Not in a bad way, ...
Mar 21 -
Re: My Black is Beautiful
Sorry I didn’t get to this in time for BHM! But then, every month is a Black history month. First thing is that you don’t need a comma between skin ...
Mar 20 -
Re: A house not far away
I highly recommend “no longer wanting to stay in the bed”. It would flow so much better. Try reading it with the “the” and without the “the” and you’ll see. ...
Mar 19 -
Re: Warm Summer Feeling
I like your rhymes a lot, even if I was hoping for a bit more elaborate schemes when I saw your username. (I jest.) They are well placed. I wonder ...
Mar 19 -
Re: it is like that time Frank O'Hara wrote the line 'I am the least difficult of men'
Wow, this is beautiful. I’ve never read any Frank O’Hara, I take it that this is inspired by his poetry. Not sure if I should go and read some now ...
Mar 19 -
Re: MY VIEWS ON MODERN LOVE.
The general sentiment of the first two paragraphs has been around for a long time, even before the internet and social media. But it still rings true. It’s interesting to ...
Mar 19 -
Re: Why
Hey there! It’s St. Patrick’s Day event review time! ☘ 1st Leaf: First Impressions & Initial Thoughts This was a poem I enjoyed a lot! You portrayed autism very vividly. ...
Mar 19 -
Re: inhale
I’m so glad that I’m a fast enough reader that I was able to read this for the first time while synchronizing my breathing to the prompts. It was a ...
Mar 1 -
Re: ytniatrecnu
I liked this a lot and it’s fun that it’s managed to become the #2 featured work on YWS right now and yet I’ll still be the first review. So ...
Feb 24 -
Re: this is all mine, this is all that I feel
I have no idea which was written first, because I’m all too familiar with weird writing patterns. I wrote a chapter of my budding novel entirely backwards for the most ...
Feb 22
